Sea Breeze Haiku
Posted on 04.20.06 by lucia @ 11:46 am

Sea Breeze
 

Sexy fringe flutters
    swaying in the soft sea breeze,
                      blue as the ocean.


Dee saw this pattern at Elann.com and just knew a Haiku lay inside. I mean, cat attracting fringe hanging from the skirt the width of a belt? A knitting pattern like this requires some comment!

At least she’s modeling it at the sea side where other knitters are likely wearing less!

Normally, this would end a haiku entry. However, since the whole “fib” meme arose, I can’t help thinking up those too. However, despite the pseudo-mathematical nature of fibs, starting with two single syllables often leads to horrible choppy, ugly poems, so you’ll see more haiku than fib. But, as long as I thought of one, and it’s not too dreadfully choppy, I’ll let you decide.



 
Blue
fringe
dangles,
fluttering
as a woman strolls
near the silent sandy seashore.


Please leave comments! 4 Comments

4 Comments »

  1. :) It’s a pretty zesty outfit.

    Comment by Dee — 4/20/2006 @ 2:26 pm

  2. Zesty is the perfect adjective to describe this!

    Comment by lucia — 4/20/2006 @ 2:32 pm

  3. On one hand, I think the outfit looks lovely on her. On the other, I think having it made out of knit fabric is just plain dumb. hehehe

    If this outfit was out of some sort of gauze-like fabric, it would be totally awesome. Granted not that many people would actually be able to wear it and look good. hehehe

    Comment by Becky — 4/20/2006 @ 5:16 pm

  4. I looked at the pattern & don’t quite get it – it has a thong? Bikini bottom? Weird.
    Without the weird thong, though, it’s a bellydance belt.

    Comment by Cassandra — 4/20/2006 @ 11:25 pm

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